1.I am so thirsty like a desert.
2.The guy is so cheap as a kid.
3.She is so smart as a computer.
4.I love it more than yesterday.
5.The teacher is so boring like watching a clock.
Tall Poem
My life is like trowing
the dice never know
whats coming behind.
In the streets
I walk looking at the
sky.trying to buy a
pan to see whats up.
My rhyme ends now.
Wednesday, March 28, 2012
Thursday, March 8, 2012
personification
1.bob marley buffalo soldier- buffalo soldier dreadlock rasta there was a buffalo soldier in the heart from America.
2.bob marley brain washing- it's just the poor's brain washing and i don't need it no longer washing.
2.bob marley brain washing- it's just the poor's brain washing and i don't need it no longer washing.
Monday, February 13, 2012
Metaphor Poem
Water is a glass
shining and shining like a diamond
Water is a mirror
reflecting and reflecting anithig
Water is a gold
valued and valued like a soul.
by:Jesus V.
shining and shining like a diamond
Water is a mirror
reflecting and reflecting anithig
Water is a gold
valued and valued like a soul.
by:Jesus V.
Thursday, February 2, 2012
Poetry Writing Exercise:Metaphor
Comparing the universe to an object
1.The moon is a big ball.
2.The stars is a lamp.
3.The cloud is a sponge.
Comparing an emotion to an object
1.Exament is a earthquake.
2.Anger is a volcano.
3Surprising is a bussted ballom.
Comparing a person to an object
1.My mom is a book.
2.My sister is a weight.
3.My grandpa is a old shoe.
1.The moon is a big ball.
2.The stars is a lamp.
3.The cloud is a sponge.
Comparing an emotion to an object
1.Exament is a earthquake.
2.Anger is a volcano.
3Surprising is a bussted ballom.
Comparing a person to an object
1.My mom is a book.
2.My sister is a weight.
3.My grandpa is a old shoe.
Wednesday, January 18, 2012
Tall Tale
A big broom was in the floor. I picked it up, then she talked to me and said "Hi, let's go fly". Then I got on board, and I got on a good trip. Then the broom said "I belong to a witch, I got to go back now". Then I never saw her again.
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